And now...

Our first attempt at a video.

Good Points:

• It's a good mix of performance and narrative
• Some good shots/transistions used

Now for the bad...:

• We need more footage. The story remains unfinished, seeming pointless at the moment.
• There is not enough variety in the shots of the performance.

So for an action plan:

• Complete filming of a story, to tie into the narrative of the song.
• Film performances, getting more shots to make the performance more interesting to watch along side the narrative.

Still. Not bad for a first try.